1.) Cole shuddered as he had another spasm while he had the chills and Rosy shoved Edwin lightly.

2.) Cole sipped water from the glass as she held the glass to his lips while he was stuggling to swallow the pills.

3.) Cole closed his eyes as Rosy cleaned and bandaged his open wounds.

*Cole's Circle Justice*

If I were on Cole's Circle Justice I would definitely recommend anger management so that he would understand how to control his anger. Maybe if he learns different ways to handle himself and the trouble he gets into, life would go a lot smoother for him and he wouldn't have so many problems. I think Cole has had a very hard life. While growing up with his abusive father and ignorant mother, the only way he knew how to handle things was physically.

Sentance Correcting

*Sentence correcting*

1.) His daughter asked a question. It was a difficult moment.

2.) The fog was thick, and it was hard to see.

3.) He felt sick as he got ready to throw the gernade.

4.) He threw the gernade. It made a sound.

5.) Kiowa gave him some advice, and it didn't help.

6.) He gets upset when he thinks about the war.